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Skylar's avatar

HI!!! This is amazing!!! There are SO many lines that had me reeling (which is wild because it usually takes me a while to be emotionally attached to a piece!) but this bit right here:

someone has to leave and someone has to be left, that is the way it's supposed to be.

the glorious sun will forever chase the luminous moon, they will be you and i - that is my decree.

IM IN LOVE!!! It hurts but in the best bittersweet way possible. This sense of inevitability, the reference to the sun and moon, as if this is their nature-I’m gushing but you get the gist!!! Adore it!!! Thank you so much for sharing this with me!!!!

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phi ♡'s avatar

this is so beautiful

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Vandana's avatar

Love the idea of seeping over into another life… so magnanimous the idea of pure love, it hurts.

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parisa's avatar

you must be a wonderful person to love, the way you write is proof. every time i come across your words, my heart is warmed. thank-you for your words yet again.

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kshi's avatar

that is incredibly sweet of you to say! thank you for your words and for reading mine, i truly appreciate it. <3

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Ankita Das's avatar

OMG I'M CRYING THIS IS AMAZING 😭

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kshi's avatar

thank you so much for reading! <3

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nandana's avatar

this was so well written, absolutely beautiful 💜

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kshi's avatar

thank you! <3

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Mohor's avatar

I wish I was at least close to you in writing stuff like this... your writing is.. I don't have any words to describe how your writing made me feel

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kshi's avatar

im sure the way you write is incredible! all of us write differently and remember we tend to judge ourselves the harshest so pls don't feel like your writing is lacking. also thank you for reading my words <3

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Mohor's avatar

Waaahh...This..

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